by Elisa Braden
GENRE : #Victorian-ghost-romance #novella
My rating: ★★★☆☆
I'd actually give this one a 3.5!
This was a super quick and pleasent read, easily finished in just a few hours.
___ A LITTLE BIT ABOUT THE STORY:
Elizabeth Nightingale, a governess with a swindler's past, finds her world shifting. When her neighbor shows up at her doorstep on a rainy day, she's not rattled by the scars on the left side of his face. What does unnerve her is that he immediately sees through her efforts to hide her good looks and realizes she's keeping a secret.
Meanwhile, architect Thomas Warwick is busy renovating an ancient abbey, which is challenging enough without dealing with village gossip, workmen spooked by ghosts, and curious neighborhood kids. Things get even more complicated when he finds himself trapped in his cellar with the bewitching governess from next door.
As they battle a blazing attraction neither expected, Thomas and Elizabeth must learn to trust each other. But can two hearts with so many past scars find a match made in moonlight? Or will the abbey's haunted history threaten a love that's just beginning?
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Overall, this was a nice read, even if it wasn't particularly memorable. Of course, I didn't expect too much from such a short story. It felt like it lacked a bit of coherence at times, but then again, trying to weave together so many different elements into just a few pages – lively children, a ghost, two main characters with painful pasts, and open-door love scenes – is definitely no easy feat!
Personally, I would have preferred a shorter opening scene, especially the conversation with the children. It was starting to bore me a little, and I was almost ready to give up on the story right there.
A few more pages, though, could have really helped flesh out the ghost's connection to the story. That was probably the least satisfying and least plausible part for me.
The sudden lack of inhibition due to drunkenness also felt a bit forced. However, overall, I really liked the couple in love. This makes me think that if this short story didn't fully showcase the author's skills, a longer novel probably would. So, I'll definitely be giving this author more chances!
Something important, at least for me: the sex scene was explicit but thankfully never vulgar, which I genuinely appreciated.
Honestly, if it had been otherwise, I probably would have given this only 1 star.
The way the male character approached the act of love – slowly and delicately – not only made the moment really enjoyable but also kept the tension high, both for his beloved and for me as a reader.
I really, really loved Thomas and Elizabeth as a couple.
He's a bit introverted and incredibly respectful towards her, but can be fiery when the moment calls for it.
She, on the other hand, is a bit cynical about the world, yet deep down she just yearns for true love, a place where she can unleash her passionate nature and reveal an almost childlike sweetness.
In my opinion, they're a perfectly matched couple who, despite their rather unbelievable 'insta-love,' completely captivated me. Even though it was a short story, these characters are still on my mind even now that I've moved on to another book.
To wrap things up, while you might find more exciting or original stories out there, this one still gave me a few hours of fun, passionate, and sweet reading all at once.
I'd recommend it for those times when you have a few free hours and haven't quite decided which long novel to dive into yet.
Thanks for reading my thoughts! :-)
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